Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Thinkin of You (a Mean Poem)


I'm gonna be thinking about you

when I know you're feeling bad

It's gonna put a smile on my face

knowing that you too are sad..

alone on Friday night

in your room in your sexiest underwear...

waiting for someone to call...

hoping that someone cares.

I'm gonna be thinkin about you

when I know you're alone and blue..

knowing that I did what you...

what you told me to do...

You told me to find someone

who could treat me better than you...

find me a girl, who would treat me

the way I deserve to be ...

treated..

You didn't think I could do that,

Did you?

I'm gonna think about you

when I know that you're all alone...

not getting any text messages

nor any calls on your cell phone..

sitting alone in your room on a

Saturday night in your sexiest underwear...

trying to find one of your old standbyes to

call...

and no one is at home or bothers to care...

I'm gonna be thinking of you.

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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 21, 2008 at 7:58 AM

    I am first today...Yes that was a very mean poem...but a good one just the same.

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  2. AnonymousOctober 21, 2008 at 7:59 AM

    Reading my favorite blogs and drinking coffee again...Nice job
    Keith..Was this written to an ex-girlfriend?

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  3. AnonymousOctober 21, 2008 at 8:03 AM

    Awww,I thought I was first..Cool
    Artwork as usual..even cooler poetry..reminds me of something Prince would write.lol

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  4. AnonymousOctober 21, 2008 at 8:04 AM

    Brother, the visuals I was getting from this peice made me want to take a cold shower.lolol...You've been on a roll this week.

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  5. KeithOctober 21, 2008 at 8:07 AM

    I actually did write this about an ex- several years after the fact
    though. I was listening to something by Joni Mitchell that actually inspired the thought.

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  6. KeithOctober 21, 2008 at 8:46 AM

    Tomorrow a new mystery begins!

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  7. AnonymousOctober 21, 2008 at 9:59 AM

    I hope there is some sex scenes in it.

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  8. AnonymousOctober 21, 2008 at 10:01 AM

    Hey Keith, Love both of your blogs,
    especially this one...Nice poem..

    @anonymous-you need a man-lololol
    I wish I knew who you were.

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  9. Still PatriceOctober 21, 2008 at 8:57 PM

    Lol that was mean but prolly well deserved

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  10. SLCOctober 21, 2008 at 11:52 PM

    I think your new post goes up in about 15 minutes, but I gotta comment on this one. The poem was great, but the creature in that picture would have know problem ......you know. My favorite line......knowing that I did what you...what you told me to do.

    See ya at midnight bro.

    SLC

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