/Was it something in her eyes
that caught you by surprise?
There goes your heart..
you've been down this road before..
don't travel it anymore..
don't fall in love./
/When she laughs, she makes you feel
like all of your fantasies are real..
better check your heart..
remember what you used to say
love is a game that you never play.
why fall in love?/
/Where is the man who could always beat the odds?
where is the man who always rolled the perfect seven?
is he a boy again, about to lose his way?
convinced he's tasted a slice of heaven?/
/You Laugh and say-That guy is dead
he's using his heart instead
you'll lose this game.
I don't understand you at all, you swore you'd never fall
don't fall in love.../
/Where is the man who could always beat the odds?
where is my man who always rolled the perfect seven?
is he a boy again about to lose his way?
convinced he's taken a glimpse at Heaven..?/
/So I guess you've made up your mind
to leave your past behind..
but I'm not mad at you and your heart...
I guess true love has made you see...
It's time to set your heart free...
you've fallen in love.../
/true love has made you see,
it's so easy to just be free....
you've fallen in love./
I'm First Again....Great Poem keith!
ReplyDeleteOh so what you're first-lolol..Bangin Poem keith!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful Poem keith
ReplyDeleteNice work....You are very contoured!
ReplyDeleteInteresting take..You could have almost turned this poem into a short story.
ReplyDeleteVery Lyrical...and quite emotionally visual.
ReplyDelete@Simon-Wow you really got deep on me there with that.-lololol.
ReplyDeleteI'm with Lisa on the short story.
ReplyDeleteThought of Cock Robins a little.
I'm really feelin' this one Keith.
ReplyDeleteYou are the man, when we are talkin' bout feelin' the love.