Monday, May 11, 2009

To Be Invisible

To Be Invisible
whenever you're around
then you would never witnessing
the new love that you've found./

No one would have to witness my
public shame..
I wouldn't have to hear people
laying blame../

I was a fool to let you go
seeing you now
it's apparent that I know../

I don't want to go near it
I don't want to hear it..
I don't want to go there
it's just not fair../

To be invisible
so you'd never see me cry..
when you walk by
with that other guy../

To be alone
with my wounded pride
truly alone
without you by my side./

I was a fool to let you go
and every coming day
my conscience says 'I told you so'/

I don't want to hear it
I don't want to be near it
I don't want to go there
it's just not fair...
to be invisible..
to be invisible...
to be-
invisible./

18 comments:

  1. Can't tell you how many times I've felt like this!

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  2. As always ,your poetry is very visual...I can picture this.

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  3. Grover Tha PlayboyMay 11, 2009 at 8:41 AM

    Nice, but that's to be expected.

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  4. Heyy Keith..Nice work as usual.

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  5. As a woman, I have wanted to be invisible myself...This is a universal situation here.

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  6. As usual, the business man.

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  7. This takes me to a recent place man, for real.

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  8. I like this...Give us more poetry.

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  9. I love the poem.

    I like this guy's art too, it's so colorful.

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  10. You don't know how much I can relate to this poem...from a woman's perspective.Thank You.

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  11. No Matter what..you keep it coming..You are so prolific man.

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  12. I can sooo relate to this.

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  13. Poetry, Fiction, Short Stories
    and great commentary...What is it you don't write?lolol..Love your blogs.

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  14. Nice Poem.....

    What's Next as far as stories go?

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  15. so touching and so real.

    love to live; live to love!

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