
I gave you everything I had
I shared every part of me
So why did you treat me so bad?
What more of my soul did you need to see? /
we could've had a good thing
you and me
but you turned a deaf ear to my sincerity../
You're used to people who won't hear anything at all
You can't deal with someone who
wants to hear...
your arrogance and pride will surely go before you fall
guess you never knew how to deal with a man who was
sincere.../
We might have had a good thing
you and me..
but you turned a deaf ear to my
sincerity../
When I was being real
when I allowed you to see me bleed
you couldn't allow yourself to feel
no, you didn't feel the need./
You're used to people who won't hear anything at all
but I wanted to hear...
I won't feel too sorry for you when your self absortion
leads to your fall...
because you couldn't deal with me when I was being..
sincere!/
we could have had a good thing
you and me
but you turned your pretty little head
to my
sincerity./
(for fdp)
I shared every part of me
So why did you treat me so bad?
What more of my soul did you need to see? /
we could've had a good thing
you and me
but you turned a deaf ear to my sincerity../
You're used to people who won't hear anything at all
You can't deal with someone who
wants to hear...
your arrogance and pride will surely go before you fall
guess you never knew how to deal with a man who was
sincere.../
We might have had a good thing
you and me..
but you turned a deaf ear to my
sincerity../
When I was being real
when I allowed you to see me bleed
you couldn't allow yourself to feel
no, you didn't feel the need./
You're used to people who won't hear anything at all
but I wanted to hear...
I won't feel too sorry for you when your self absortion
leads to your fall...
because you couldn't deal with me when I was being..
sincere!/
we could have had a good thing
you and me
but you turned your pretty little head
to my
sincerity./
(for fdp)
Great poetry as always.
ReplyDeleteGreat Poem! I love the first verse, but line 4 says it all!
ReplyDeleteI gave you everything I had
I shared every part of me
So why did you treat me so bad?
What more of my soul did you need to see?
I'm Speechless,this is so good.
ReplyDeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteWhat a powerful and painful written
ReplyDeletework!
I felt your pain bruh!
ReplyDeleteGood One Keith!
ReplyDeleteSo poignant!
ReplyDeleteThis was powerful and to the point!
ReplyDeleteYour poems always take me down the road of my past romantic life.
ReplyDeleteI suspect we are kindred spirits Keith!
ReplyDeleteThis Almost made me cry!
ReplyDeleteAgain...Wow...This was good!
ReplyDeleteGreat poetry!
ReplyDeleteAlmost made a playa shed a tear man!
ReplyDeleteNobody throwin drawers tonight huh?
ReplyDeleteGood poem man.
Keith,you always write from the heart..you keeps it real up in this
ReplyDeletepeice and on your other blog too!
Love it man..it's pure genius how you keep up two blogs nearly everyday.
ReplyDeletea poignant and powerful piece of truth Keith.
ReplyDeletelove to live; live to love!