Saturday, November 29, 2008
Don't Wanna Talk Too Long
/Maybe before we go to bed...
I need to get into your head..
because you have some concerns
that maybe I should address...
before I slip your panties from beneath your dress...
perhaps I should engage your mind...
but I hope it doesn't take up too much time..
I hope we can get right to it...
because we both know we want to do it..
so tell me what's on your mind...
Come on...
Cause I don't wanna talk too long./
/You keep asking me
about your pressing need
to define what it is we are doing..
are we in a relationship?
or are we just friends who just happen
to be screwing?
I say why waste time in defining
and in categorization...
when we appear to have a great situation
that is working for us in the meanwhile../
/You say that that is all well and good..
but it was never clearly understood..
when we began seeing each other...
if we really had feelings for one another..
and perhaps we really should....
Well if you really want to get to it..
All we are is friends with benefits..
If you want something a little more defined...
Then right now let's take the time..
To talk about it...
So let's come right out with it...
but I don't wanna talk too long../
/So girl, before we go to bed...
let's take the time to get into each others heads..
if you have any concerns that need to be addressed...
before we both get completely undressed...
let me engage your mind...
but please don't take up too much time...
don't get me wrong...
I'm concerned about your feelings...
but I don't wanna talk too long...
don't get me wrong...
I want to talk it out with you,
before we get it on...
but I ,don't wanna talk too long../
"take your clothes off girl..."
I don't wanna talk too long.
I love this one, because I don't like talkin' too long either Keith.
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem as usual!
@Somebodies Friend- Thanks Man-lolololol.
ReplyDeleteNice Poem...but such a man's poem
ReplyDeletethough..lololol
Nice to hear that point of view from a man...but I already knew that at that point, we are not going to get much conversation from
ReplyDeleteyou.-lolol
Nice poem...interesting point of view.
ReplyDeleteExcellent Poem Keith, I'm right wit that man..
ReplyDeleteMEN!!!-lolololol
ReplyDeleteI can't lie...I don't want to talk at that point either...Good poem Keith.
Interesting perspective. I liked it though.
ReplyDeleteI liked this poem, but I didn't like the premise...Men should want to talk and be concerned about the woman's feelings...Even at the point of sex.
ReplyDelete@Halo- I think he was trying to make that point in a subtle way..yet still be true to the nature of a male.
ReplyDelete@James- You know me so well..Thanks
ReplyDeletefor the save brother.-lololol.
Great effort Keith, I can really relate to this poem.
ReplyDeleteI'm really with this one Keith..
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem.
@Angie B- You sound like my kind of girl..Maybe we could get together..lolololol.
ReplyDeleteI don't think you could handle me
ReplyDeleteplaya. I might make you cry.lololol.