Friday, January 16, 2009

And If


Baby you've got skin that's softer than a Rose petal
and a smile that's warmer than the sun that made it grow.
and after the first time we made love
I just had to let you know
that you were more than I ever expected..
and I think it's high time that you and I got connected./

/And if it feels like Heaven to you..
the way it feels to me..
then we are destined to be together,
you see...
just you
and just me...
And if this feels like Heaven..
my mind is telling me so..
Then it feels like forever
and by now I hope you know./

/Girl , remember when I used to watch you walk down the street
back in the days before I got to know you?
There was never a question in my mind
I wasn't going to waste another minute of my time...
I was sold on you..
because , I knew then positively-
that there was a special feeling that you were giving me../

/And if this feels like Heaven
the way it feels , when you're with me..
then we're destined to be together you see,
just you, just me..
And if it feels like Heaven
I hope your heart is telling you so...
Then it also feels like Forever
and by now you ought to know.../
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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:10 AM

    You have been so romantic this week Keith..I must say I've been enjoying the poetry.

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:11 AM

    Ditto what my room-mate said!

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:11 AM

    Keep Up the good work Keith.

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:12 AM

    Heyy Keith, Another nice poem.

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:13 AM

    This was so pretty, Can't think of any other words to describe it.

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:13 AM

    Me likes, Me Likes.

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:14 AM

    It didn't have any sex, but it was a nice poem just the same.

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:14 AM

    I just loved it!

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:15 AM

    You on some Smokey Robinson ish with this Keith..but I like it.

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:16 AM

    I keep using that one word to describe you brother, and here it is again..Smooth!lol

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:16 AM

    Nice Poem. Time for another story though!

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  12. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:17 AM

    I could go for another week of poetry myself..This has been good.

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  13. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:18 AM

    Very Nice ...Super blogger.-lololol.

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  14. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2009 at 9:19 AM

    Hey Man, nice work...but I'm with Tate2...I'm fiending for a story.

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  15. SLCJanuary 16, 2009 at 10:38 AM

    Glad I get the emails. Wonderful distraction. Poem or story, it's all good.

    Speaking of story. I like Sepia (or Sephia) but I've got a protective gene for Kevin. Seems like when he went out of town on business he kept it strictly business, while she was to quickly tempted. Feel like I'm wrapped up in a soap opera.

    Have a blessed weekend.
    SLC

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  16. KeithJanuary 16, 2009 at 10:47 AM

    @SLC-Hello Friend, how have you been? Funny you mention Kevin and Sepia..They'll be returning next week in a new story I've been working on...The first installment is called "Straight Deck"

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  17. Lyrically speakingJanuary 16, 2009 at 10:21 PM

    WOW...lovely piece, spills passion all over it, happy Friday and have a good weekend

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