Saturday, May 23, 2009
After You've Gone
The Deeper I looked for something in you..
The deeper I fell...
I felt as though I was falling deeper into a
bottomless well..
you could never seem to face your demons
and I had my demons too!
but had you of talked more to me..I would have
faced them with you../
But baby now that you've gone
life has opened up for me in a way
I never imagined.
Now that you've gone
a light is shining through my window
and I've discovered a strange new passion
After you've gone..
After you've gone../
All I ever wanted to do
was make love to you until the cops came knockin...
like Maxwell said in his song.
but all you ever seemed to do
was drink until your head was rockin,
then have the nerve to tell me that everything I did was wrong../
but honey
now that you've gone
I've met somebody else
who makes me feel alive again..
and sugar
now that you've gone
I've got a woman on my arm
who's both a lover and a friend...
After you've gone
After you've gone
bye,bye aint so bad baby...
After you've gone..
I've found love
After you've gone
I've found peace of mind,after you've gone../
I'm first today!
ReplyDeleteNice poem Keith!
ReplyDeleteI liked the poem..Glad you're back!
ReplyDeleteI've really been enjoying the poetry the last few days.
ReplyDeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteGreat Poem Keith, but waiting for your next story patiently-lol.
ReplyDeleteIt's been nice reading the poetry the last few days.
ReplyDeleteOh yeah,I liked this one too!
ReplyDeleteSweet!
ReplyDeleteMuch like a song..That's what I like.
ReplyDeleteThe poetry is alright..but nothing to make me toss my panties high!
ReplyDeleteThis speaks to me...Man, you must be in my head!
ReplyDeleteMan, I lived this..Had an alcoholic
ReplyDeletegirlfriend once.
Nice one Fam!
ReplyDeleteYou stay on it man, don't know how you do two posts on two very different blogs a day.
ReplyDeleteYou know I really dig the stories,but the past few days I have been enjoying the poems just as well!
ReplyDeleteLove your poetry,Like your stories they are very visual.
ReplyDeleteI really dug this one fam..reminds me of a situation one of my partners was in with a young lady.
ReplyDeleteYou sir ,are a true man of letters!
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