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Wednesday, January 11, 2017

Going Cold

In an a recently closed Loft in another part of town...Monique was just waking up from a fitful sleep...

"Where am I?" she asked..

A white male in military fatigues and a gray t shirt walked into the room with her...

"Sit down and shut up." he said.

"Who are you?" asked Monique..

"Dr. Talbert...let's stop playing games...You know I'm not going to tell you who I am...Now the other day...You had the body of a young woman in your morgue...I believe you found something on her that I want.." he said..

"You murdered that poor girl didn't you?  And that security guard..?" said Monique..
"Yes..I did.." he laughed.

"That security guard was 27, He had just got married, He had a newborn baby." said Monique..

''Should I start playing the violins? He was in the wrong place at the wrong time...He saw something he shouldn't have seen...I had to kill him..." he said.

"And you're going to kill me, my sister and my brother in law regardless ,aren't you?" said Monique...

"Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhh, but how you die, Painlessly or Painfully is up to you...Now as I was saying... the other day...You had the body of a young woman in your morgue...I believe you found something on her that I want.." he said..

"Did you check her pocketbook?" asked Monique sarcastically...

The man sporting the crew cut and the gray t-shirt and military fatigues laughed...

"I did...I broke into your facility that night and searched both bodies and her pocketbook over at evidence at the police station...I found nothing...I was at your duplex...and I found nothing your domicile or your sister and brother in law's...So that means one thing...YOU must have what I want." he said.

"If you're talking about the Zip Drive...I don't have it....So what are you going to do...Slap me around..?" she asked.

"Oh nooooooooooo...I wouldn't dream of slapping around a sexy woman such as yourself.." he said and produced a Hyperdermic needle..

''Years ago,people such as I had to result to torture to get people to talk and give up information...but I don't have to do things like that now..."he said...

He pulled a gun and pointed it at Monique..


''Sit down Ms. Talbert..Please..." he said..

Monique did as she was told and he injected her with whatever was in the needle..

"Ouch" she said..
"Sorry about that..." he said..

After about one minute...Monique felt like she was on the North Pole....Cold beyond belief...She was shivering...

"OHHHHHHHHH ...OH MY GOD...WHAT DID YOU INJECT INTO ME?  OHHHHHHHHHHHH.." she moaned..

"It's a drug you are no doubt unfamilliar with Dr. Talbert...Right now, you are so cold, I could wrap you up with thirty blankets and you'd still be cold.. You're shivering......This is a side  effect of the  truth serum if you will...It breaks down any defenses you have in your brain....any compulsion to lie.. You can only tell me the truth...This drug has a long name, but I prefer to call it by it's nickname.. "COLD" he said.

"COLD??" said Monique...

"Yes...and I gave you just enough to compel you to tell me whatever I need to know...Had I given you anymore.. You'd be dead within an hour.." he said..

"Gee thanks...arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..so cold...ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god...I'm so cold..." she said..

"Now...did you find a zip drive on the dead girl's person yesterday?" he asked..

''Yes...It was taped to the waistband of her panties."said Monique..Who hated herself for willingly telling him what he asked her..

"Which explains why I could not find it...Do you have it on your person?" he asked.

"No...I gave it to my sister and my brother in law...They are cops.." she said.

"I know they are....So they have it..." he said.

"They locked it in a safe deposit box for safe keeping...It's in Octopus Gardens...Under The sea, where you'll never find it....I don't know where their safe deposit box is..." said Monique..

"Ohhhhh I see...Well If they want to see you alive again..they'll get it for me..." he said,laughing maniacally...

"I have been paid a lot of money to retrieve it...Once I have it in my possession...I'll painlessly eliminate your Sister and Brother in law....Of course unknown to them...You'll long be dead!" he said.

II-

Lieutenant Cotton looked more upset than I'd ever seen him...

"We are going to find Monique Lieutenant...We are going to find her alive.." I said..

"You guys are my best detectives...My very best...but you're chasing a phantom....We don't know where he is..We don't have a clue...And we don't have enough evidence to bring him in for murder..." said Lt. Cotton

"And he's got my sugar baby somewhere torturing her for something she knows little about.." he said nearly in tears....

''You have my word..We are going to find him and make him pay for what he's done...both killing that girl and that young security guard and kidnapping Monique...I promise you that Lieutenant..."I said.
'Where is Monica?" he asked..

''She's running down leads...She's talking to people in the neighborhood, checking traffic cams, street cams.."I said.

"This guy is too good to get captured on that.." said Lt. Cotton..

Never before had I seen him so down and out...So lost ,so defeated...He loved Monique...I could see that now...It wasn't just lust...It was true love...I hope she appreciated how much he loved her..
III-
Our Suspect was smart and he was good....

But what he didn't realize was that Monica was a mutant and had the power to hear thoughts and feel emotions...but not only that, because her twin sister was related to her through blood...She could "Lock in" as she called it...Concentrate and catch her sisters thoughts..Her essence , where ever she was...and find her...It was like a mental scent..Monique could do the same thing to her...She had taught me how to "Lock in"

As I spoke...Monica was sitting in Monique's domicile amongst her things, her clothes...et al on her bed...concentrating...and picking up Monique's essence...

 Monica was not only picking it up, but picking up that Monique was not quite herself and needed help soon..
It was amazing to witness...Because Monica and I had swapped bodily fluids so many times..(Sex) and we had an emotional attachment...I was able to "Lock in" and find her on two ocassions and she has been able to find me..

I had no doubt in my mind that she'd find Monique...
Because of my wife's unique powers, I had sometimes been able to actually feel her orgasms as well as my own...an incredible feeling that was like no other...She told me that she could feel mine too....One of many reasons I was never going to leave this woman.

III-
Detective Kylie White was actually checking the traffic cams...Detective Kylie White was alone...It was 3:30 AM, she was scrubbing Traffic ,ATM, Business and Street Camera footage of the night of Monique's kidnapping...


Detective Wally Becker walked into the room...

"Hey sexy...What you doin?" he asked and kissed her on the cheek...She giggled but continued watching the screens.

 "I'm checking out footage...Just trying to help Nate and Monica find out who snatched Monique and where this clown might have taken her....What are you doing up this early?"she asked.

"I couldn't sleep...So I came to work!" he said.

"Wally you need to stop lying...You were horny...Admit it."she laughed..

"Yeah...That too."he laughed...

He eased in her chair and she sat on his lap...

''Ummmmmmmmmmmmmm girl you feel good." he said..

"And you're as hard as a baseball bat....ouuuuuuuuuuuuuu.." she said.

He liked that she was wearing a skirt...He ran his hands along her beautiful brown shapely legs...he ran his hands up her skirt...he rubbed her hips,her buttocks...

"Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Wally, not in here...Somebody could walk in here at any minute.."she said..

''Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...it's all good..."he said and unzippered his trousers...He looked around..There was no one in the room, but two officers in the adjoining room...and soon they left...

"Wally stop it..let me just look at a little more of this footage and ..ouuuuuuuuuuuuuu.." she moaned.

"Wally ,put that away...Come onnnn now."she cooed..

He ignored her and slipped her panties to the side...

"Wally stoppppppppppppppp.."she giggled..

"Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm..."he moaned as he entered her slowly...

She squirmed a little bit...

"Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu..."she moaned...

"Lawd..." he said..
"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh Wally..ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.."she moaned...

She turned and kissed him softly....

"Ohhhhh lawwd..." he moaned.. He thrusted inside of her softly for a good fifteen minutes...Slowly going crazy...Kylie had to admit...it did feel good, but it was too risky...

He had tried to do this once before and she had stopped him...This morning, they were the only two in the room and Wally was beyond the point of no return...

Two hours seemed to just drift away...

Kylie had one of the most fierce orgasms...She'd ever had in her life...She cried like a baby...Wally exploded..Shaking and rattling the chair and the desk...

Then she stood up slowly  and fixed her clothes...


Wally fixed his trousers...He was drenched with sweat...So was she....


She smiled..


"You are so nasty...Go home boy.." she said.


"Come with me..." he said..


She eyed the screen....She saw a car...a rental car a block away and she saw Monique and a White man with a crew cut and a gray t-shirt getting in...He looked like he had a gun pointed at her..


"Bring that up...That's our guy...Look...We got him on the cam..."said Kylie..


"Yeah, we got a clear path..."said Wally...


Just then the phone rang...


It was Monica...


"Kylie...I'm so glad I got you...I found Monique...she's at this address...Get back up...Nate and I are on our way.." said Monica..


"I just tracked him, but how did you...??" asked Kylie..


"I'll explain later.." said Monica.


IV-
And At the abandoned Loft ,Monique was awakening from her drug induced sleep...The effects of the truth serum had worn off and her body temperature was back to normal..




"My sister will find you you know..."said Monique to her captor...


''I seriously doubt that...I'm too good at what I do to be outwitted by some street cop..." he laughed...




"FIRST TIME FOR EVERYTHING PAL!" said Monica as she walked into the loft with her gun drawn...


He was shocked...


"HOW DID YOU FIND ME?? HOW?? I TOOK EVERY PRECAUTION!!! SHE'S NOT WEARING A WIRE...I CHECKED HER WHILE SHE WAS ASLEEP!...HOW DID YOU FIND ME??" he bellowed , shocked that he was found.. His sense of professionalism and his ego had been assaulted..He had never before been tracked or found by police..in several countries...He couldn't believe that Monica and I had caught him...He was upset...Monica could sense his unease and decided to use it against him...




"Same way I found you...Through good police work..."I said coming in from the other side...I had my gun drawn also...

He put his pistol to Monique's head...

"Come any closer and I'll put a hot one through her head..I'm an expert marksman...I won't miss from this range...drop your guns...both of you..." he said..

"Give it up...You won't make it out of here alive." said Monica..

"I'm betting I will..Now drop your guns or the good doctor here gets it first..Then I'll kill you both..Neither of you are fast enough to out draw me..Face it..you're beat.." he said.

"Not gonna happen..And you're out numbered and out gunned..We did call back up..This isn't television...This place will be swarming with cops soon." I said.

He cocked his gun...

"I don't think so....Nice Bluff . Now you two gonna drop those guns??? No ?  Okay. . Your choice..." he said.

Just then a shot rang out and hit him square in the chest...he fell backwards...astonished...

"ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" he screamed..."I don't believe it...I've been shot.." he moaned as he fell back...blood streaming from his chest...a look of total unbelief on his face....

He still had the gun in his hands and he went to aim it.. Monica and I both opened fire...Hitting him multiple times and watching his body jerk like a drunk as he tossed his gun up in the air and he fell to the ground.. He let out a loud scream like a woman..."Wooooooooooooooooooooooooou" just before he fell..

"I don't believe it...I've been shot.." he moaned just before he died...



"Nate...That was an incredible shot to his chest...I didn't know you could shoot so fast..."laughed Monica as she untied Monique..


"Thanks Nate, Mo -Mo.. I knew you'd find me." said Monique..




"Actually...I can't" I said and pointed to Lieutenant Cotton, who was standing near the door..His pistol still smoking..
"Kylie called me...She found this place on the Traffic cam...but uh...how did you find it Mo-Mo?" he asked, smiling...

"I'm a good detective...Don't you always say that?" said Monica.. Who knew she'd have to tell him one day that she was a mutant...but not today!

He looked at Monica and Me...


He smiled..

"Yeah, I guess you two are...You damn sure are...Two of my very best!" he said..

He pulled Monique to him and kissed her passionately...

"Ohhhhhhhhh Frankie...Thank you all for coming to get me.." she said..

"Always...Nothing was going to keep me away from my sugar baby." he said..

"Awwwwwwwwwwwwww" she cooed.

He kissed her passionately and took her into a back room , where he ran his hands all over her body and kissed her and groped her...
"Ummmmmmmmmmmmmm ,damn girl, you feel good." he moaned..
She was so glad to be safe and to see him that she didn't stop him, she let him...She laughed even...

Outside, I heard Police sirens and saw a half dozen police cars drive up
and several guys from SWAT and the Tactical unit rush into the building...
Monica holstered her weapon....She peered at the gun on the floor....

''Well partner...We've cleared our two murders...This is the murder weapon...and here is the silencer over here....This was our guy" she said peering at Vince Matthew's face. His lifeless eyes still staring at the ceiling in shock

The police marched in and we saw a familliar face...

"Nate, Monica..How long has it been?" came the voice of Detective Carlos Wallace..

"Hi Carlos.." said Monica.

"Heyyy man. How's things on the Moon?" I said ,shaking his hand...

He looked down at the dead killer, Vince Matthews...


"Crazy Nate..Looks like you solved your two murders and mine...but unfortunately...This case is not over." he said.


I didn't think it was!

(TO BE CONTINUED)


11 comments:

Anonymous said...

"Because of my wife's unique powers, I had sometimes been able to actually feel her orgasms as well as my own...an incredible feeling that was like no other...She told me that she could feel mine too....One of many reasons I was never going to leave this woman."

You've got to explore that in a future story!

Swaggie said...

Ditto, what Anonymous said!

Cheryl said...

LMAO at the comments!

Halo said...

I was so scared for Monique...I was hoping they got to her in time...

Angie B. said...

Monique is a main charactor...Keith hasn't as of yet killed off any main charactors...

Toni said...

I was concerned about Monique too and angry that this psychopath was putting her through that...Clapped when Nate and Mo-Mo blew him away!

Sunflower said...

I usually eschew the mayhem...but I was glad when Nate, Monica and Lt. Cotton gave this particular bad guy his just due!

Lisa said...

One of your more nastier bad guys....Glad he was disposed of quickly!

Vanessa said...

He was so butt hurt that he got tracked down...LOL!

Brenda said...

When he injected Monique...I really thought she was going to die...Then I remembered he needed her alive to find out where the zip drive is...He still doesn't know and to lure Nate and Monica into a trap...which he failed to do!

Rita said...

Glad that they saved Monique and killed the bad guy....So I'm assuming, somebody badder is behind this entire thing.