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Wednesday, February 8, 2017

The Fifth Girl

THREE WEEKS LATER-

Monica and I had cracked five murder cases....We had sent five killers to prison where they belonged....and now on this Friday Night, the disappearence of murder suspect Polly Hamilton was once again on our minds...

I sat in our friend Zig's spot with Detective Kylie White, enjoying drinks...
She looked at me and asked..

"You really love Mo-Mo don't you?" she asked..

"Love her to death...but you've suspected that as far back as when I first became her partner...before anybody knew we were an item...didn't you?" I asked..

"Yeah...I could tell...The way you two would bring each other breakfast, coffee...The way you would defer to each other and finish each other's sentences....and how guilty you guys would look when you both came in here late...I could tell...That's what I want..." said Kylie...

''What's goin on with you and Wally?" I asked.
"Nothin bad...I just want to know where this is going...that's all...I don't just want to be a booty call all the time."she said....

Just then, Monica, Monique and Lt. Cotton walked in...

"Hey baby..Hey Kylie...Sorry I'm late...Just had to finish up the paper work on the Westinghouse case..."said Monica, who gave me a wet sloppy kiss....

"Ummmmm Hi babyyyyyyyyyyy.." she cooed..

"Hellooooo." I said and smiled at her.....

"Zig, a round of beers for my lady and my detectives...Job well done guys..." said Lt. Cotton, who leaned over and kissed Monique in the lips...
"Damn, what this woman does to me.." he exclaimed...
"Frankie stoppppppppppppppppp.." she giggled...blushing like crazy!!
"Comin up guys..." said Zig.
 Martinis came up for the girls ...
and Micro Brews came up for me and the Lieutenant...
"Ummmmm these are delicious.." said Kylie White..

"We are going to get good and drunk tonight...We deserve it...We've been pretty busy lately." said Monique...

"The Bert Crackers case still bothers me..." said Monica.

''We closed that." I said.

''We didn't catch Polly Hamilton!!!....It bothers me that she's still out there..It's almost like that case went cold.."said Monica..
"Still no sign of her huh?  She's on the FBI's most wanted list....Has been for close to two weeks.."said Lt. Cotton.

''Excuse me for uh eaves dropping guys...but uh are you talking about the prostitute who was a murder suspect a few weeks ago?  You still haven't found her huh?" said Zig...

 "No Zig...It's like she just vanished into thin air." I said.
"And the thing is...We were so close to catching her..."said Monica..

"You know four other girls vanished just like her , two last summer...one right before Christmas and another one last month....All Prostitutes...all young...like under 25...Two of the girls....the two that vanished last summer worked around here, used to come in here hustling drinks...I ran em off....Then I didn't see em again...A couple of guys came askin for em....I just thought they moved on....Then A detective from Missing persons came around ,looking for both of em...and I realized it might be more...The girl who vanished around Christmas was a waitress here for a time....I heard she was a stripper at one of the local clubs...One night she was at work and went on break and never came back...from break...That was right before Christmas...And you know that club you guys went last month....??" asked Zig.

"Oh you mean, BLUE?" asked Kylie..
Blue was a hot club we had checked out one night and then had come to Zig's spot for after hours...
''A girl who used to work here as a waitress quit here to go work there...She was a stripper at the local clubs too...Well anyway, last month...I get a call from the owner over there askin me if she still worked at my joint...I said ''No she quit a month ago to come work for you..'' He said that she never showed up....He figured she changed her mind and came back here to work...I said no....She hasn't been seen or heard from since.." said Zig.
"Those type of girls move from place to place, job to job all of the time..They could be anywhere..."said Lt. Cotton..

"Hmmm, it does look and sound kind of weird....and I mean, we have a missing girl too." said Monica..

"Mo-Mo...We try to duck a few punches...You guys just cracked five cases....Five and a half if you count the Bert Crackers case...Don't you want a break?" said Lt. Cotton.

"Let me at least look into the claims...Lou....It may be nothing...but you never know." said Monica..

"Okay...but if you two get a call...let this go and attend to your current case." said Lt. Cotton...

"Of course..." I said.

Monique whispered in my ear....

''Wait until you see your wifey...it's going to drive you maddd." she giggled...

That night when we went home..I looked at Monica...

"What?" she asked....

"Can I have a sample of  uh what you're going to be uh modeling...??" I asked..

Monica smiled and then laughed...

She then went in the closet and pulled out the clothes...

"You are too much...you know that?" she said...

The shorts were wayy too short to be wearing out in the street and the heels were what we called "Stripper heels..." ,but Monica had to play the part....She had to convince the street person she was one of them...That way, they would relax and talk and open up in a way they wouldn't if they knew she was a detective...

And speaking of opening up...I was about opening her up and making sweet love to her...

It was moments before I had her clothes off and She was moving herself down on my hard and engorged penis..

She put her arms around my neck and stared into my eyes as she moved up and down slowly...

"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh...Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my goddd Mo-Mo...Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmph." I moaned..

"Nateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...I love you soooo much bae.."she said..

"Ohhhhhhhhhhh,I'm glad you do..."I said as we sat in that chair and she moved up and down, seemingly slower everytime...

"Oh my god!" I moaned, thinking, I was the luckiest man in the universe at this moment...

Three Hours went by

We  decided to take it to the bed.....

"I knew if you saw me in that get up, you'd get excited.....I didn't think I'd ever have a need to wear those shorts again.." said Monica as we began to make sweet love...

"You can wear em for me.." I said.

"I'll wear em just for you....ONLY for you after next week...ummmmmmmmmmmm!" she said..

"It was good of the Lieutenant to indulge us...and let us continue to search for Polly.." I said in between soft kisses and thrusts...

"Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god...yessssssssssssssssss....I just hope we ...ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Nate...I hope we find something...." she said...

Six Hours seemed to pass by so idly...

The bed was squeaking, but squeaking lightly and I had taken the headboard off ,so that it wouldn't slam against the wall....
Monica and I continued to kiss each other passionately and just like before...We both came together and intensely.....She was actually crying and continuing to kiss me as I continued to explode......

"I hope this holds you for a few days bae." she said.....

"Ummm, it should, but you never know.." I said as I mounted her and we began making passionate love again...

"Ouuuuu, you never get enough do you?" asked Monica..

"Not of you....Noooo." I moaned..

"Awwwwww..." she said sweetly...

another Two hours of sweet ,sweet lovemaking continued.. our bed was squeaking even louder now than it had been before.....

"Ummmmmmmmmmmm this is too much Nate..ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.." she moaned...

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...you aint never lied Mo-Mo.."I cried out..

Nothing like a Friday Night and not having to work the next morning.



II-
Monique didn't lie....She dyed Monica's hair and braided it and Monica put on some shorts that were wayyy too short and some black stilletto heels and a loose Black top.....

"Sis...I think your husband just had a heart attack " laughed Monique...

My eyes nearly came out of their sockets....

''WOW!"I said..  I couldn't take my eyes off of her or tell her from Monique...now that both of them had red hair..
Both sisters laughed....
"Eyes back in the sockets partner....This is just for undercover work....Hopefully, I never have to do this again...You and Kylie are to never let me out of your sight and I will be wired..." said Monica... "Guess I don't have to worry about  the not being out of your sight part.." laughed Monica...I was staring intently....

 "God Nate, Don't have a heart attack...It's just shorts....You've seen her in Thongs and Bikini panties before that I'm sure were more revealing than these hooker shorts"laughed Monique.

So for the next week and a half....Monica was undercover in some of the sleaziest strip clubs and bars in the city...
 Talking to the Exotic Dancers/Strippers and their johns....
Kylie and I were a safe distance away listening to everything from a wire she was wearing...


and watching and taking photos of all who came and went..

"I know this is torture for you , listening to men breathe heavy and slobber all over your wife....Why don't you just let me do this Nate? , Don't torture yourself." said Kylie to me..

"I'm okay....It's all part of the job....just don't expect me to go undercover as a male exotic dancer." I said and winked..

"Now that would be funny." laughed Kylie...

One particular afternoon....Monica was getting ready to come on shift...when the Assistant Manager...a woman named Tillie spoke to her...

"Michelle ,You are the most popular dancer we've had here since Polly.." she said.

"Polly Hamilton?You knew her?" asked Monica....

"Sure did....Haven't seen her in a minute....It's almost like she vanished into thin air." said Tillie...

"You got a phone number for her?" asked Monica...We never found her smartphone...

"Yeah...I was the only one who has a number for her....I called and called and called and left messages and she never returned my call or my texts and that is so unlike her.....Me and her was close or at least I thought we was.." said Tillie..

"Yeah Polly could be like that....I knew her back in A.C." said Monica.

"Yeah?  Well let me see your phone, I'll give you her number...If she contacts you, tell her Tillie said hi" said Tillie..

"I'll do that.." said Monica..

"You know, between me and you...Polly used to date.. A lot of the girls date the guys they meet here and have lap dances with....For extra money....I used to do that....but I aint no hooker, that aint me...and Polly used to steal from her johns too...That didn't make her too popular...There was three other girls who worked here, they used to steal from their johns too....and just like Polly, they vanished without a trace..."said Tillie.

"Really?" said Monica..

"Don't get excited...two girls vanished last summer....Then it was girl that vanished right before Christmas and another around last month...and now Polly...A lot of the girls are scared....They aint datin as much as they used to...We think an angry john is out there ,possibly offin these girls...I hope not and nobody knows...but that's five girls who have vanished..." said Tillie.

"I don't plan to date..." said Monica..

"Good...Then you got nothin to worry about....But you popular....Seven guys have asked me for your number and if you date or do private parties..." laughed Tillie..

"Tell em forget it...Look Tillie..." said Monica, who showed her photos of four girls, all known prostitutes who vanished...The three Zig told us about and then the fourth one that a detective from Missing persons told us about...

Tillie's eyes lit up...

"That's the girls!!! All of the ones who vanished.....You're not really a dancer are you?" asked Tillie..

"No...I'm a cop Tillie and my name isn't Michelle....It's Detective Monica Nellis- Homicide..." said Monica, who showed her her badge and Identification.

Tillie looked frightened...

"It's okay....I'm murder police...I don't care about any of this other stuff....Polly Hamilton rolled a john and shot him to death...and vanished that same night....My partner and I have been searching for her for the past three weeks...and then we found out that these three, I mean four other girls vanished...Two last summer, one around Christmas and one last month...This is way deeper than our initial murder investigation...Polly is the fifth girl!" said Monica.

"Wow, you had me fooled and I usually can spot a cop a mile away....You are so sexy though and such a natural..." said Tillie..

"Yes, my husband thinks so too...When I come home, he practically chases me around the room...I'm glad this is my next to last night of doing this..I feel kind of self conscious dressing like this.."said Monica.

"You look good babe..and you have a nice body....You said you have a husband?" asked Tillie.

"Yes...He's my partner , in Homicide.." said Monica.

"I know he's lovin you, in those booty shorts and those stilletto heels....The guys go crazy every time you are working the pole or in the lap dance room...." said Tillie.

Monica laughed.

III-
At the squad room....a few days later....Monica and I looked at footage from the night that Polly Hamilton vanished...

"Okay, that's our girl leaving the motel after she shot and killed Bert Crackers...." I said.

"And that's her getting in the cab....Now if we follow the traffic cam and track the keycard....She went back to her apartment...She's inside...Making the bed...mopping the floors, washing the dishes and cleaning the kitchen...Then look...She gets in a white car...Look...we missed that partner..."said Monica..

"Look she goes to the diner....Now whoever drove her there pulled off...." said Kylie..

"Okay...she finishes her meal...There she is leaving and walking down the street towards her apartment...and that's it....The Street Cam in between those three blocks was disabled..Somewhere in the three block radius between her apartment and that diner...She vanishes....Never to be seen again....This is the last known footage of Polly Hamilton...So we know what she was wearing...Now look...There is that white car again...Get that license plate...copy that..." I told the technician..."Run it."I said.
"It was reported stolen a month ago Detective...It's down at the Auto pool." he said.

"I'll get down there and check that out.." I said.

"Hold up partner...I called Polly's cell phone and we are tracking it...."said Monica..

"You gettin an answer?" I asked..

"No, but ....I'm getting a location...." said Monica...

"Not to be Debbie Downer....but that could have just been where it was discarded.." said Kylie...

"Never the less...We should check it out..." said Monica...
IV-
 The phone pings led us to the underpath of the twin bridges....


''Wow....This is our place.."

 I mused as Kylie...Monica and I arrived at the underpath of the twin bridges...

"Awwww you two are sooo cute...You have a special canoodling place." Joked Kylie..

"If we find more than a cell phone here...It won't be anymore..." joked Monica...

The water looked so peaceful......

I used my cyber eye.....to scour the water's bottom....What I saw shocked the hell out of me...

"Bae...what's wrong ??" asked Monica ,who could sense my panic and my fear....."

"Mo-Mo...Call your sister...Kylie, call the Lieutenant....."I said....
"Nate!! What is it?" asked Kylie...

"There are five body bags ,weighted down....Under the water here....Ladies...This right here.....Is a cemetary!!"I said.


(DEFINITELY TO BE CONTINUED)




9 comments:

Sunflower said...

OKAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY This thing just got real scary!

Angie B. said...

Yessssssssssss, it did!

Toni said...

All of those girls are dead....Including their murder suspect...Definitely one of their murkier cases...

Lisa said...

I notice...Nate and Monica's cases are getting deeper and murkier! They no longer have simple little cases...I like that though...

Halo said...

As their relationship deepens, their cases get more complex!

Vanessa said...

If I recall ,when they first started working together...It was said that Monica really gets up for the complex cases....The ones that make her have to think.

Brenda said...

Yes...Which was why she wanted Nate for a partner...She checked out his record, his high clearance rate and the fact that he was said to be "cerebreal." a thinking detective and she thought that he and her would make a good fit.

Rita said...

She was interested in him from a professional level...He on the other hand merely wanted to get her in the bed...Remember, she kept trying to get him to focus at first...?? But eventually, she had to admit that she was attracted to him too and they fell in love...and became great partners.

Cheryl said...

They are cute together...I can't wait to see how they crack this case...