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Monday, September 21, 2015

Casual Homicide


PHILADELPHIA PA- 2040-

An otherwise normal Friday night in the city of Philadelphia....So why am I, Detective Nate Nellis heading towards the scene of a Homicide at a time when I'm technically supposed to be off duty..


Because I'm whipped...Because my partner got a call that she could have transferred to the night shift detectives coming on duty...but she took this call because she likes the weird ones...

So here I am, meeting her at the scene of this crime...The Atomic Club....Philly's hottest night spot and a
known meat market or couples bar...
Believe it or not...I'd been to this bar once...back before I got married the first time with my then partner,Detective Wally Becker...A hound if there ever was one...He told me..

"Nate my boy...If you don't get laid in this bar either you're as ugly as sin, you smell bad or you just don't want to get laid." he said..

He was right...And I think we both scored that night...

I was so far away from that now...I was married for the second time to my beautiful partner...The former Detective Monica Talbert....Now Detective Monica Nellis, who met me at the crime scene...



I saw her from a distance as I got near the crime scene...She had on a beautiful white mini skirt with a purple top...I hadn't seen her much today..She had been in court on another case and after that had been at a seminar....

It was nice seeing her now....She looked more like a club goer than a detective....
When she saw me, she smiled and walked over to me and gave me a soft,tender kiss...As usual, she smelled great and looked great...

"Hi Honey Bunny....Sorry for this late call, but you gotta check this out." she said with the excitement of a child on Christmas day...

I was busy staring at her in that dress and her new hairstyle...

"Okay, but let me check you out first..."I said smiling sheepishly...

She smiled...

"I'm glad you like it...My sister styled my hair..She said you'd lose your mind once you saw me..." she said... "This dress is too tight...I can't wait to get it off..."she said...

"I can't wait for you to get it off either.."I said...

She gave me the serious side eye and remarked..

"Down Boy...Come over here and look at this crime scene..." she said as I headed towards a parked car across the street from the club...

Inside a car was a man and a woman, about Monica and my age....completely nude and with fresh bullet holes in the side of their head...

"It's warm out...but not that warm...They could stand to have a little more clothing on."I mused.

A female uniformed officer giggled at that remark.

A male uniformed officer said to Monica...


"Somebody just happened to notice them and called this in...about an hour ago detective.." he said.

I put on my latex gloves and opened the door....there was what looked like semen in the front seat.... a lot of semen and semen in the back seat...the woman was still positioned on the man's lap...

"It looks like they were having sex in the back seat...when they got it.."I said.

"Yeah and the killer sat up here with the gun aimed at them and watched and possibly masturbated while they were having sex..." said Monica, who now had on her latex gloves and was looking in the front seat..

"Judging by the way the seat is lurched back...We are looking at a big man, possibly six feet or more.."she said..

"It's a wonder anybody noticed them...This being a pick up club.."I said.

"I know right? All of the cars in this lot were probably bouncing up and down."joked Monica...

"Okay...I know that...and I know what this club is...question is...How do you know this?" I asked giving my wife the side eye..

"Nate, I know you want to believe that I was sitting around waiting for you to transfer to homicide, so you could whisk me off my feet...but I wasn't....I was a single ,lonely girl at one time..."said Monica..

"Ouuuuu, Mrs. Nellis, you were a bad girl....Bad is sexy....and a bad girl needs a spanking..."I joked.

"Maybe later...but for now...We have to wait for my sister to get here." she said...

''She's gonna be mad at you...."I laughed...."Oh and by the way, were you serious about uh getting a spanking later?" I asked...

Monica gave me the serious side eye...but did not answer, she just laughed....

''Come on silly...focus on the the two dead bodies and not so much on mine..." she said.

II-

 The crowds gasped as more police arrived and cordoned off the crime scene....

"Nobody heard anything..so I'm guessing the killer used a silencer or he killed them somewhere else and drove them here.."I said.

"That's what I'm thinking...maybe we should triangulate the street cams ,atm cams and traffic cams in the area and see what they show.."she said.

"I'll check with the club and see if they were in there.."I said...I popped open the trunk....

"Ohhhhh this is strange...This looks like their clothes...I said.  I went through the man's pants and found his wallet and his drivers license...

"His name is Frederick North....He's an attorney...."I said.

Monica went through the woman's purse...and phone....

"This woman's name is Dr. Nancy North....She's a pediatrician......and judging from the photos on her phone...This is her HUSBAND! Nate, these two were married..." said Monica.

"Yeah..I just went through his phone...Their wedding photo is on here....If they are married...What were they doing here at this club?" I asked..

"Unless ,like you said...they were killed someplace else and driven here." said Monica...
Just then Monica's sister and my new sister in law, Dr. Monique Talbert drove up...

She looked at her sister...

''Wow, you look great sis...Everything came out well..You are wearing that dress sis, you have to let me borrow it." said Monique, marveling at her sister's new hairstyle and her new dress..

"Thank you Nique.." said Monica....

"So why aren't you somewhere moaning and having your hairstyle sweated out?" she asked giving Monica the side eye...

"Because duty calls.." laughed Monica...

''Wow and on a Friday night...Frankie is going to be mad at you....You're keeping him from his Sugar baby." she joked..

"He'll get over it.." laughed Monica..
Monique felt both bodies and took the body temperature...

"They haven't been dead long...Three hours top...It's quite obvious that cause of death is gunshot wounds to the head....Who are they?" asked Monique..

"Frederick and Nancy North...He's an Attorney and she was a Pediatrician...." I said.

"Power couple huh?  What were they doing here at this meat market?" asked Monique...

"Oh My God Monique...you too? You know about this place?" I asked..

Monica laughed...

''Don't tell me that you don't Brother in law... You were married before and you do have a son and I don't think you were a virgin prior to getting married...I'm certain you passed through here a time or two." she said..

''I certainly did not...I was waiting for my soul mate...Your sister..." I lied...

Both my sister in law and my wife gave me the side eye and looked at each other and busted out laughing... I know that Monica had already scanned my thoughts and determined that I had in fact been here and had gone home with a young lady...

She smiled...

"It's nice that you feel I'm your soul mate, but that's the only truthful thing you've said partner.." she said..

"Oh okay...."I said and the three of us laughed...

''Release the bodies...I'm going to have this car towed...There is a lot of DNA to be gathered and perhaps a print ..."she said.

A police tow truck towed the car as the two bodies were removed and transported to the M.E.'s wagon...

Surprisingly enough in the parking lot...Several cars and SUV's were bouncing up and down and the moans of both males and females could be heard...

"Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.."

"um,mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmph....ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..."

"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh baby, give it to me...ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.."

"Oh My god...oh my goddddd..ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...."

"Yessssssssssssssssss.....Yessssssssssssssss..ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh baby yessss.."

 "God, They couldn't go and get a room? Or go home?" asked Monica, incredulous...

"I know, right sis? Gosh, these people are sooo thirsty now of days..they can't wait..."she said, equally disgusted..

I smiled....

III-

 I got film footage from the Atomic Club....I wanted to know if our married couple had been in there...

They had!!!! I saw the wife sitting alone and several guys sending her drinks and then her husband sending her a drink and walking over to her...

"This makes sense..They were playing...Role playing...He pretended to pick her up as a single..and they went out to the parking lot..."I said smiling..

"You ever do that partner?" asked Monica ,laughing...

"No...but I'd like to....I want you to wear that dress when we do do that."I said.

She busted up laughing....

I got back to the murder at hand...

"Look, see their car in the parking lot...?" I said.

''Yeah...but look at the parking lot cam....They drove all the way to the back of the parking lot...Now they are out of the view of the camera...a few minutes pass by and there is their car driving back to where we found it....The door is opening and look...there is our suspect...but his face is covered...with a hoodie...He's getting out of the car and vanishing....He walked down that alley...There are no cameras..He was smart...Almost like he scoped out the area...and had it all planned..."said Monica..

"So our suspect is an unknown white male..Wow..That really narrows it down doesn't it?" I remarked..

"I know right? Let's go to the M.E.'s office and see what my sister has found, if anything."said Monica...

IV-
It was a full moon out...Monica and I walked up on the roof to head to my Flying car...She turned to me..
"It's a full moon..." she said.

"Yeah ,it is....Probably why we caught a double murder...a weird one like you like."I said.

As we got to my flying car,Monica turned and kissed me passionately...

"I recall owing you this..."she said...

I returned her passionate kiss...

"They still haven't put cameras up here on this roof have they?" I asked..

"Nope." she said and smiled...

I softly laid her down across the back seat...I slipped her panties down and she kicked her heels off..

I unzippered my trousers.....

Monica parted her legs and laid back on the seat...I softly ,but eagerly entered her warm and very moist center.....

"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god Nate....ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.." she moaned....her head turning from side to side...

"Shhhhhhhhhh...yessssssssssssssss...ouuuuu yess Mo-Mo." I moaned as I entered her....

  I kissed her eyelids...her cheek..her neck....

"Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Nate..."she moaned...

"Yessss Mo-Mo." I moaned...

"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh My goodness.."she moaned..

"Damnnnnn girl...oh my god..."I moaned....it was feeling too good...

"Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu..Nate.." she moaned...

I moved in and out of her for close to 45 minutes...She held on for dear life,kissing me slowly and passionately.... ..I tried hard not to moan, but it felt too good...My flying car rocked from side to side as the two of us made sweet love...in the backseat...

We were lucky...only two other people had flying cars and neither was here and there was no one else on the roof...It was near midnight...There were only four detectives on duty and two were out on call...and maybe three uniformed officers mulling around downstairs....

"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh...ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god Nate...ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. I missed you..I thought about you all day.."she moaned...

"Damn girl...ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..Same here...."I moaned myself as I continued to move in her a little faster...

She began blowing softly in my ear and giving me short little kisses that drove me over the edge...her too.....

and finally we both managed to come fast and furiously..

"Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.."she moaned.. She stared at me...almost like she was looking through me...tears and sweat rolled down the side of her face and I stiffened up like a board and exploded with wild abandon....

"I-I love you Nate."she said quietly...staring at me with those trusting eyes...

"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..I love you too Mo-Mo..." I moaned almost in unison....

She cracked up laughing then...

"I love it when you call me that!" she said, smiling and hugging me..."Come on...Let's....Let's get going.." she said and hugged me again..

I got up fixed my trousers and my shirt....She pulled her panties back up, put her heels on and attempted to straighten out her hair...

We looked around and kissed each other for a few minutes...under the sparkling moonlight..

"Come on...let's go see your sister..." I said.

IV-
 At the medical examiners officer..Monica and I observed both bodies...Both were young ,healthy ,attractive young people..

"Hey...Someway to spend a Friday night huh?  Well, the cause of death is a no-brainer...both were shot in the head with a gun ,which probably had a silencer on it...but I found a large amount of Viagra in Frederick's system.....He was a relatively young man...I wouldn't think he would need it...But some young guys take it so that they can perform longer..."said Monique....

"And you know this how?" I joked..

''Wouldn't you like to know?" she joked and playfully punched my arm.. "Anyway I found something else of interest....Two different types of semen in the woman.....Her husband's and someone elses..an unknown semen...."she said.

''So the killer could have raped the wife and made the husband watch, then had her have sex with her husband and watched , then masturbated and finally, killed them both.."said Monica...

"That's what I think, one of two combonations....The semen in the front seat is a match for the second strain of semen in the woman's body...I ran it through decks for a DNA match and there was one...You guys are looking for someone not in the system.."she said.

"You get any prints?" asked Monica.


"That's another surprise...Only the husband and the wife's prints....no one elses...their car is still being processed...but my guess is..your killer had on latex gloves.."said Monique.
"You guys get anything on the street or club cameras?" asked Monique.



"We got a slight visual of a male getting out of the car and running down that side alley next to the club, but no facial...We are still checking nearby ATM cameras, Traffic cameras and street cameras...Still looking at club cameras too...Soooooo ladies..we are hunting a phantom..."I said.

"I think our killer knew these two....This was too casual... He didn't rush...He had sex with the wife...and held the husband at bay...No this killer took his time...He was familliar with these two in some way..."said Monica.

"Tommorow,I'll look up his client list....and Mo-Mo, you look up her client list..." I said...

"Yeah and we can talk to family and friends of both...co-workers...Somebody should know something.."said Monica...

"You two were made for each other...You guys really get into these murder cases..."she said smiling...


"We both like the weird ones like this that you need brain power to figure out.."I said.

Monica hugged me...

"When I met Nate,I met my counterpart....." said Monica who then kissed me on the cheek....

"That's so sweet...Well..We are done here for now...It's after 2:00 in the morning..." said Monique...

"I know a late night spot we can go and get some Hot Wings and beer..."I said.

"You know the Atomic Club has great Barbecued wings...They closed an hour ago though.."joked Monique...

Monica busted out laughing and the two sisters high fived each other.....

"Okayyyy,Okayyyy, everybody is such a comedian.."I laughed...I loved my wife and my sister in law.



(TO BE CONTINUED)



10 comments:

Sunflower said...

These two are sooo cute!

Halo said...

Yes they are!

Anonymous said...

STANDING AND APPLAUDING AND THROWING MY PANTIES TO THE CEILING!

Rita said...

Looks like they have a case loaded with sex this time!

James Perkins said...

I'll say-LMBAO!

Lisa said...

I like this case they have...Frankly it's getting me aroused!

Vanessa said...

I won't say this case is getting me aroused, but it does peak my interest!

Toni said...

As usual, the beginning of a great storyline.

Angie B. said...

Another great Monday thanks to you Keith!

Brenda said...

Incredibly sexy....And Cute, these two..