"Can I get you a drink detectives?I don't drink alcohol...But I have all types of fruit juices.." he said.
"Oh I'm a photographer..I do shoots around the country...I'm out of town a lot.." he said.
" So did you know Yvette Smallwood?" she asked him...
"Yes..Quite well..we were neighbors and good friends.." he said.
"You ever been to her condo?" asked Monica..
"Oh yes..Yes...many times..." he said.
I showed him photos of Taylor Coleridge and Cal Winston, even Cal Winston's wife....
"You ever see any of these people coming and going? " I asked..
I sensed him tense up...
He thought quietly and then slowly answered...
"The two men ,yes...I've uh never seen the woman before..." he said and then angrilly looked at Monica..
''If you wish to know something Detective...JUST ASK ME ,like your partner is doing!" he said...
"You...You've got a high fever...You're soaking wet..."I said...
"I'll say...woooooo Nate ,I want to do it to you sooo bad right now?" she said and kissed me passionately..
"Mo?" I asked...
"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh ouuuuu let's go home.....We can come back tomorrow....Ouuuuuu..I am sooo horny right now it's not funnny ,ohhhhhhhhhhhh,ouuuuu, ask him if we can use his room, just for a few minutes...Ohhhh,I need you inside of me nowww...Ohhhhhhhhhh.."she moaned...
''WHAT?"I asked as she kissed me slowly and softly...
Aaron Burns was cracking up...
She whispered in my ear...
"Natttttttttttttttte..I'm wearing those white sheer bikini panties that you like with the purple waste band...You know you want some of this...You always want it..."she said...
Now I was getting aroused a bit more...
Monica's sub conscious was sending me a message telepathically...
"Nate...Get me out of this room!!!!...Get me in the hallway...Something is not right...Get me out of here,please!!!"
I opened the door...I stared at Mr. Aaron Burns...I lifted Monica up and we headed for the hallway...
"I'll be back...Don't Move..."I said menacingly...
I carried Monica out into the hallway and laid her down...
"Bae..Please...You alright??I'll get you to a hospital..."I said..I was afraid..
I walked back into the condo...
I looked at him...
"BURNS! You're a mutant aren't you?" I sneered...
He bowed his head...
"I am..."he confessed..." A closeted one JUST LIKE YOUR PARTNER...but I suspect you know she's a mutant..don't you?" he asked..
"She's my wife...Yes, Of Course I know.."I said.
He smiled...
"I thought you two were in a relationship...Which explains why when she got aroused she went to you..." he said.
"What did you do to her?" I asked.
"She attempted to read my mind...I don't like having my mind read...I have a right to my thoughts...When I felt my mind being scanned I released my phernomes.." he said...
''Your what?" I asked..
"Phernomes... That's why I wear so much cologne...but even the colognes I wear can't fight mother nature....When I feel excited ,threatened or aroused sexually..I release phernomes....They are...A secreted or excreted chemical factor that triggers a social response in members of the same species. Pheromones are chemicals capable of acting outside the body of the secreting individual to impact the behavior of the receiving individual. There are alarm pheromones, food trail pheromones, sex pheromones, and many others that affect behavior or physiology. Pheromones are used from basic unicellular prokaryotes to complex multicellular eukaryotes. Their use among insects has been particularly well documented. In addition, some vertebrates and plants communicate by using pheromones.
In animals, sex pheromones indicate the availability of the female for breeding. Male animals may also emit pheromones that convey information about their species and genotype.
At the microscopic level, a number of bacterial species (e.g. Bacillus subtilis, Streptococcus pneumoniae, Bacillus cereus) release specific chemicals into the surrounding media to induce the "competent" state in neighboring bacteria. Competence is a physiological state that allows bacterial cells to take up DNA from other cells and incorporate this DNA into their own genome, a sexual process called transformation." he said...Then he smiled.
"I know you didn't understand any of that...Let's just say ,I made her body temperature rise higher than normal and her sexual arousal higher than normal..." he said...
"You could have killed her"I said.
''Sometimes she can't help it....Thoughts are so loud or apparent...She can hear them."I said.
"I don't believe that or appreciate that..."he said.
"I guess your powers are great when it comes to picking up chicks huh?" I asked.
"Sometimes....but if there is another male around...A strong male presence that the woman is attracted to...my powers don't always work in my favor..the woman gets aroused as your wife did and she goes after the man she is attracted to..." he said.."Or..it just doesn't work at all." he said sighing..
"I'm going to come back and talk to you again tomorrow..but right now...I'm taking my wife home.."I said.
"Just put her in the shower and let her get some sleep...She'll be fine." he said.
"She'd better be...Because if she's not....You'd better find another planet to live on." I said as I left...
I lifted Monica up .She was weak , but conscious...
"I gotta get you home baby." I said.
"You always take care of me.." she said...
"I'm supposed to.."I said.
II-
It had been an interesting day...We had interviewed three good suspects and eliminated two...I still wanted to talk to Mr. Aaron Burns...
I ran the shower and undressed Monica and put her in....I was so turned on myself ,I wound up getting in with her..
"You sure you're alright now Mo-Mo?" I asked..
"Yes...I'm fine...I swear....I don't know what came over me in there.." she said.
"He told me he has something called phernomes...He made your body temperature rise and raised your sexual arousal rate..." I explained...
''So he's a mutant...Like me, huh? Wow... Nate ,you could have really gotten lucky in his condo...I have never been that horny in my life...That guy is dangerous...I'm just glad you were there Nate..." she said.
"So you know about guys with his power?" I asked.
"Yes...I've heard of mutants with that power...Never met any.."she said...
"Did you get anything from him, before he discovered what you were doing?" I asked..
"No..and I can't arrest him for assaulting an officer without outing myself.." she said.
"Well..I want to talk to him myself..Maybe I'll take Wally with me.."I said.
"You can't..."said Monica..
"Why Not?" I asked..
"Because he's off for a few days just like Kylie...and you know what else?" she said.
"What?" I asked..
"I'm bettin they're not talking about police work.."she said as she kissed me softly and slowly and fondled my now engorged penis with her soft hands...
"Awwwww lawddddd!" I moaned..
She giggled...
Hot soapy water covered us both and we were kissing each other passionately....and making love.....I lifted Monica up and entered her slowly and softly....
"Ummmmmmm.." I grunted..I began thrusting slowly and slowly losing my mind...
"Ouuuuuuuuuuuuu..ohhhh my goodness..ouuuuuuu...Nate...Ohhhhhh" came her shrill voice..as she bounced on me and I slobbered all over her breasts....
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...""Ohhh baby, give it to meeeeee....ummmmmmph..."she moaned...
"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... Mo-Mo......ouuuuuuuuuu, more, more... ohhhhhh..."I moaned..I couldn't believe how large her breasts actually were...and how surprisingly round her hips were....I was in hog heaven...
''Lawddddddddddddddddddddddddd"I moaned...as I kept pounding inside of her..
"Ohhh Nate...ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...this feels sooo damn good...I needed this,ouuuuuuuuuu...you don't know how I needed this bae...ummmmmmm... you are always just what I neeed!"she moaned as she kept bouncing on top of Me....My penis was hitting her in all of the right spots and she felt as if she was slowly losing her mind too....Monica looked like she didn't know whether to laugh or cry,she felt so good...
"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh gooooddddddd lawdd it's soooo goood...ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh damnnn girl...ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sweeeeet jesusssssssssss ..arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.."I cried ...out!!"Morrre...Morreee....morrre...ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.. "I screamed..
"Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Nateeee....Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu."she moaned...
'You are driving me crazy right nowwww!" I moaned...
"Nate..ouuuuuu..Nate....OHHHHHHH. Nate I'm cumming...ohhhhh my goodness..ouuuuuuu!"she wailed...
"Yesssssssssssssssssssssssssss..ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu, Nate!!!!Yesssssssssssssssssss" she yelled...tears flowing freely and her body just shaking...
We both began shaking and holding each other...We were both climaxing.....My bottom lip was quivering...Monica was shaking and sweating profusely....breathing heavily.....and crying a little ,it felt so good...
"Oh My god, Nate..ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu..I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!" she screamed suddenly....
"Mo-MO.....Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god! I LOVE YOU TOO! OHHHHHHHHHHH"I screamed as I came harder than I had in awhile.
By now the hot water had washed all of the soap off of us and was starting to get cold.. We wrapped each other up in towels and walked out of the shower...
We were still kissing...
''You! As long as you were with me, I was safe...I wasn't worried..." she said.
"Maybe he did have a little effect on you." she laughed as she kissed me..
(TO BE CONTINUED)
11 comments:
Mannnn! You on some X-Files ish with this...A Mutant who can control a woman's arousal rate and detect when his thoughts are being monitored...Loved it!
Monica has finally met her match huh? A Guy who can tell when she's scanning his thoughts and rise her arousal rate to a fever pitch...
I thought that Aaron Burns Power had overtaken Nate as he was aroused also...but that wasn't so much phernomes as it is that Nate always wants to get into Monica's panties!
You are the Master of the twist....I liked this!
STANDING AND APPLAUDING AND THROWING MY PANTIES TO THE SKY!
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh ouuuuu let's go home.....We can come back tomorrow....Ouuuuuu..I am sooo horny right now it's not funnny ,ohhhhhhhhhhhh,ouuuuu, ask him if we can use his room, just for a few minutes...Ohhhh,I need you inside of me nowww...Ohhhhhhhhhh.."she moaned...
''WHAT?"I asked as she kissed me slowly and softly...
Aaron Burns was cracking up...
When I read this passage..I knew that this guy was some kind of mutant,I knew that he could sense Monica was scanning his thoughts and I knew that he was controlling her emotions,making her horny...I was surprised...But I must admit..It was the most interesting part of this story so far...This is your killer..I'm certain of it!
I think Aaron Burns is the killer too! The title "Hot Burn" was spot on...Loved it..Loved seeing Monica ,usually a self assured and confident woman knocked off of her game!
How come Aaron Burns powers didn't work on Nate? Or Did they...He was getting aroused? Or was he just naturally aroused by Monica?
Like Angie B.said-Nate always wants to get in Monica's panties....He's been horny for her since the day they first met...Monica, while she likes Nate is the more level headed of the two...Aaron Burns directed his powers at Monica because he was angry at her for trying to read his thoughts...He's very sensitive...I loved the combonation of powers..
I agree with Grover Tha Playboy, this was some X-files ish..Loved it!
Nate loves Monica so much....He's probably never been this much in love in his entire life...It was sweet the way he took her to safety...and the way he took her home and took care of her..I love that you show Black couples in love and you have broken the negative stereotypes I find in other forms of media..Even our own!
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