Monday, November 17, 2008

I Can't Believe


/The other day my cell phone
indicated the call was from you...
You never call anymore unless
there is something you want me to do..
Don't shake your head ,you know it's true../

/You said that you were throwing your
new love a birthday party
and you were inviting me to join
you two...
What would make you think that I
would be interested in a celebration
of him having you?/

/See, I can't believe
you would choose him over me after all that I've done for you...
I just can't believe
you would choose him over me after all that he's put you through../

/See, If I still smoked weed, I'd take a big hit and lay my
head back and forget all about you...
But I don't drink or get high anymore so I guess I'm stuck
in the real world with you and it makes me blue../

/ After all of the lies he told you and the sleepless nights...
it defies all laws of reason to me that you are still by his
side..
I'm sorry, but that's one party that I won't be attending...
I won't be a clown in that circus..
I'll be looking for a happier ending.../

/I can't believe
that you would choose him over me after all I've done for you..
I can't believe
that you would choose him over me after all he's put you through.../

/how bout all the lies and distortions??
lies and distortions-
and all of those other girl's abortions...
all of those promises that he'd do better
he'd do better
and mood swings that changed like the
weather girl,
and yet you say you still want him..../

I can't believe..
I just can't believe
you'd choose him over me girl, after all I've done for you...
I can't believe...
you'd choose him over me, after all he's put you through..
foolish you./

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is coming from a real personal place isn't it Keith?

Anonymous said...

Wow, this is too real to just be some made up ish...

Anonymous said...

Wow Keith, that's all I can say.

Anonymous said...

I'm with tate2- This sounds real
personal Keith.

Anonymous said...

Is this about an ex-girlfriend Keith?

Anonymous said...

This has a very real feel to it.

Anonymous said...

Interesting!

Keith said...

lololol-Just when I was beginning to think that nobody read my poetry. It's actually based on something that happened to someone I know.

Anonymous said...

Man this reminds me of somethin I did go through and I smoked a turbo myself just to cuill out.

Anonymous said...

That's why I'm a playboy..I can't get caught up like that.

Somebodies Friend said...

This one is troubling Keith,

It reminds me of something I went through with a past love of mine, it was so painful at the time it just about killed me!

But we all live and learn, and let go of the pain, that's right, I finally let go of the pain, the pain is gone!

All any of us can do is move on and forgive those who have made mistakes and misguided decisions that cause us pain.

It doesn't hurt anyone but ourselves to hold on to the pain.