Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Picture These Things (Day trippin)


Imagine this
you and I alone, with a fine bottle of wine
our cell phones and Blackberry's off
no interuptions this time.
running a hot soapy bath...
both of us slipping into my deep tub..
we are sharing a laugh
as our two bodies rub.../

/Picture these things in your mind...
that's the kind of afternoon I want to spend with you
we haven't been alone like this for a long time..
so picture these things I say to you, in your mind..
in your mind..
in your mind.../

/Imagine This..
you and I making love until the cops come knockin..
the neighbors smiling behind our backs
the next day..
embarrassed because they heard the bed rockin..
How about breakfast and lunch and maybe a movie
the next day??
hasn't this been a romantic getaway??/

/Picture these things in your mind..
because that's the way I want to spend the day with you..
it could be such a very nice time..
and it's been so long since I've spent a day with you...
so picture these things in your mind..
in your mind...
in your mind.../

let's take a little trip.....

day breaks...
you're still awake
and we go floating on...
floating away...

take this little trip with me ...
in my mind...

take this little trip with me..
through time...

floating away...
floating...
floating somewhere...

away...
away we go..
alone no more...

take a little day trip with me girl...
take a little day trip with me baby...

13 comments:

Somebodies Friend said...

I picturing it Keith, only not with you, ha ha ha.

Put with the gal!

Anonymous said...

You are so romantic Keith-lololol.

Anonymous said...

Ouu la la..I like the way you think
Keith-lolol

Anonymous said...

The first part of this was romantic ,but those last few lines sounded like a drug trip...a kool one, but one just the same.

Anonymous said...

@Lisa..I bet you used to get down on the herb back in the day too,didn't you.-lolololol.

Anonymous said...

@Grover- I'm taking the fifth on that one.-lololol.

Anonymous said...

Another great poem Keith, you're a painter with words.

Anonymous said...

I love the poems and the fiction, but these visuals are what really grab me. WOW!!!

Anonymous said...

I'm with Sunflower...You are a painter with words Keith...Loved the poem and like Simon said- I loved the artwork too. WOW!!

Anonymous said...

I just got finished reading your other blog...How do you do it? I had a blog and I could hardly post three times in one week..You keep two blogs going almost daily..

Anyway, I loved this poem and the beach scene was great too.

Keith said...

Glad you enjoyed the poetry..Tommorrow another story begins.

Anonymous said...

mmmmmm, I am just imagining....

hey does your wife know your this kinky??


LOL

Keith said...

@kinshar- but of course-lolol