Saturday, December 20, 2008

Spoiler


Miami ,Florida....
Detective Renee Santiago drank a steaming hot cup of coffee...She barely
glanced at the USA TODAY newspaper on her desk...She was looking over her one unsolved murder case. A young ,pretty African American girl had
been found in the salt waters ,on South Beach...She had been beaten badly...but had been in the Salt Water so long that there was no DNA evidence. Her Black, 2008 Charger was missing..All they found was the Licensce Plate. This meant that the killer had taken the car and put false plates on it. She had been stripped naked and she still had not been identified.. She would have had a perfect clearence rate this month, except for this case..This damn case ,which was what Homicide Detectives call a "spoiler"..a who done it....an almost unsolvable case..

The only thing weird about the case was that two people..A Husband and a wife, also African American..who worked at one of the clubs near
South Beach, quit their jobs and dropped out of sight the day after the body was found. They weren't suspects..but they acted kind of jumpy..the day ,she and her new partner..that fine hunk of a Detective named Denzel Snipes found the body that had washed up on the beach. They seemed to be having an argument..but got real quiet when she started questioning people on the beach about the body. When she and her partner came back to question the two the next day, she had found that they quit their jobs. A further check into their residence showed that they had left their rented house. It seemed odd...but there was nothing to tie these two to any murder. They just seemed odd.

"Oh ,I see you have coffee already" said Detective Alejandro.. He had a crush on her and all of the other Detectives knew it..He would often bring her a Blueberry muffin and Coffee or one time..an omelet with salsa sauce on it, just like she liked. He was sweet, but she wasn't interested in him. Her new Partner,Detective Snipes..all six foot three, 210 pounds of him was another story..She'd love to get it on with him, but she knew that that was un-professional as well as unethical. She had never been with an
African -American man before..she often fantasized what it might be like.

"Renee, did you see this in the paper?" said Detective Alejandro.

"What?" she asked.

"They found an African -American girl floating in the river last night in
Philly."he said.

"So what?" she asked.."People die in Philly all the time, just like here. "

"It says she was beaten badly and that eyewitnesses saw her getting in a car with a man and a woman in a Black Charger...ring a bell?? Your spoiler, your who done it." he said.

"Let me see that?" said Renee..

She poured over the story and it certainly sounded strange. Nobody got a
good look at any woman, but they definitely remember the man from the
club who left with the woman and the Black Charger..Plenty of people drive Black Chargers..but this seemed like too much of a co-incidence..
Could it be? She wondered to herself...Nah, she thought...

She looked up and Detective Snipes came walking in...Looking so good, she thought...

"Renee, check this out....I did a little background check on that couple that was acting so strange..Willie Parmenter and Lola Mae Parmenter.
They were working in a Roadhouse in Baltimore and guess what they were driving? A Black Charger!! Check this out..Old Willie was trying to put his willie in some gal and Lola Mae jumped on the gal..only she gave Lola Mae all she could handle....but here is where the story gets interesting. Both of em quit their jobs a week after that and left for parts
unknown...No reason, no forwarding address , nothing and the Baltimore
PD find a girl, African-American....young, pretty..beat to death in a motel
room. She'd been dead for three weeks.." He said.

She didn't care what he was saying, he looked so good saying it..she believed it.. She wasn't about to argue. She showed him the paper and the story about a third girl in Philly.

"They saw a Black Charger leaving the scene with this girl in it..Nobody remembered seeing a woman, but they definitely remember seeing a man. I think it's a connection." said Renee.

Detective Alejandro overheard what she said and side eyed her..He slapped his forehead in disgust. Hadn't she just shot down his theory earlier?? Now when Pretty Boy Floyd says the exact same thing, she buys into it... Women!!! he thought.

"Check this out Renee" Said Detective Snipes as Renee looked at him attentively...

"I found their car...a 1979 Rambler. In the long term parking section of
The Airport. It's in perfect shape...but empty,clean as a whistle and with
no plates...We identified it by the vin number.."he explained.

Renee looked at Detective Snipes and said...

"Get on the phone..call the Philadelphia PD....I think we may be able to
help them out." she said.
(To be continued soon......)

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

What a nice surprise...You gave us a little more..I'm hooked..tell me more-lololol.

Anonymous said...

What is up with these two?

Anonymous said...

Very Interesting premise...I knew that there was something creepy about these two...Is Kevin going to
be involved?

Anonymous said...

Jordy is going to remember what he saw and tell Kevin and Kevin is going to solve this thing isn't he?

Keith said...

@Angie B- These two are murderers,but there is more to them than just that..as you'll see.

@Sunflower & Ness- Sorry,but this isn't a Kevin story..I'm sure I will be doing another one in the future, but this story is about the
two of them and how obsessive and frightening love can be.

Anonymous said...

Hey Keith....Great Story!

Anonymous said...

I really didn't expect anymore to this story Keith..but I'm glad you wrote this..This couple seems to be off the hook.

Anonymous said...

My curiosity has peaked now...If they are killers, they are out in the open now...they should be arrestted or at least questioned soon right?? I know that that is not going to be the case. I'll wait
patiently.

Anonymous said...

This was a spoiler..something to wet the appetite eh?

Anonymous said...

This waiter and his wife are off the hook..This is gonna be deep.

Anonymous said...

Good Story Keith, I didn't expect it...These two are chilling to say the least.

Anonymous said...

This looks like some kinky stuff right here Keith..

Anonymous said...

I liked the story..I like how you're building this up over the course of a few days.

OG, The Original Glamazon said...

Man seems like I've coem in on great story. I am still super behind.

-OG