Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Under The Sun..


I could say I love you one million times
and it wouldn't resonate with you..
I could tell you how I love to look in your pretty brown eyes
and still I sense you would hesitate to believe it to be true...
It's then that I remember something my father once told me
something that it took my mother, to show me...
hey girl
come over and hold me.../

/You see..
there are a million love poems
under the sun...
everything that can be expressed has
been expressed..
since time begun...
but every angle hasn't been tried out...
under the sun...
and with you, I can't use a line that is dried
out..
that wouldn't be much fun...
so I'm gonna say something smart and witty
that says the same thing..
that aint really new...
under the sun...
under the sun...
under the sun/

/ I could say I need you one million times...
I could say I need you to need me too,
because that rhymes..
I like the way you smile when I'm sayin
what I'm saying to you..
You see that's the thing about those angles
That I was trying to explain to you..
That's what my daddy told me, a long time ago..
That's what my mother showed me...
so now you know../

You see there are one million love poems
under the sun..
everything that can be expressed has been
expressed..
since time begun
but you see, every angle hasn't been tried out
under the sun..
but with you I can't use a tired line that is so
dried out...
no, that wouldn't be fun.
so I'm going to write you a letter
with something new, something clever
that's really like a song that hasn't been sung..
under the sun
under the sun..
gonna say something new to you baby
under the sun
that really has been said before in a different way
since time has begun....
cause aint really nothin new bout love-
under the sun..
under the sun..
under the sun..

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

Me likey, Me Likey!

Anonymous said...

And I'm first again today! HA!

Anonymous said...

Oh Soooo What? Lololo -Nice poem Keith.You're doin the damn thing on both blogs baby!

Anonymous said...

@LMAO @ Toni & Angie B.

I liked this poem a lot Keith, It has part of my name in it-lol.

Anonymous said...

I liked the artwork..
The Poem was cool too!

Anonymous said...

I dug this poem man!

Anonymous said...

Looks like everybody beat me over here this morning...What a sweet poem to wake up to Keith.

Anonymous said...

Hey Keith, Can I print this and hang it on my bedroom wall?

Anonymous said...

Nice Poem Keith!

Anonymous said...

Getting here late...Interesting poem.

Anonymous said...

Great Effort over here Keith!

Anonymous said...

I want to print this and put it on my wall too,especially that artwork.

Anonymous said...

Really Like this poem and the title.

Anonymous said...

What's Up Keith ,Two great posts
(This one and "Keith's Space")
Keep bangin bruh.

Somebodies Friend said...

You got a smile out of me too Keith!

Keep up the great work bro!