Tuesday, December 2, 2008

So Bad...Sooo Good


I saw you walking down the street the other day
and for the first time I was at a loss for words to say..
It seemed as though you looked even better than I
remember..
Has it been that long since last September?
I heard that you were seeing somebody new..
Well good for him...and good for you../



and girl that's just-
so bad
because you were so good
the best I ever had in bed...
now someone else is loving you instead..
and that's so bad, because girl I remember
you were-
sooo good./



I think of all those nights we spent together
with no regrets..
you were so beautiful standing naked in the
shower dripping wet..
We made love in every room in that old house...
For a minute I even entertained the idea of you being
my spouse..

but it was not to be...
you're living with him now and not me..
Funny, if someone had told me it was going to be like this then
I would have thought it an impossibility.../



/and that's so bad
because
woman you were
sooo good...

now he's loving you instead
and that's so bad..
because I can't
get it out of my head...
and you need to be-
in my bed...
because you were-
soooo good...

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

Whoooooo weeee, another hot one.

Anonymous said...

And I'm First today,whoopeee!!!

Anonymous said...

I see ya Keith,playa...playa...lolol

Anonymous said...

I thought I was first today...dang.
Good poem Keith..When are you writing another story?

Anonymous said...

This was H-o-T- ....Hot!

Anonymous said...

I'm liking these sensual poems you are writing lately ...are these poems an insight into the next series of stories you're working on?

Anonymous said...

Ummmmmmmm, this one brings back a
sweet memory I had of this guy I used to date a few years ago..It's as if you were in my head Keith.

Anonymous said...

I have to agree with Toni...I'm enjoying these erotic poems and illustrations as well.

Anonymous said...

Been There Brother..That's all I'm gonna say-lolololol...Been There.
Good Poem.

Anonymous said...

I'm enjoying the poetry too, but like Tate2, I am waiting for another story or series. I hope more fiction is forthcoming..I really enjoyed it.

Anonymous said...

This had me rushing to take a cold
shower Keith...I read it early this
morning...lololololol...

Anonymous said...

I had to take a cold shower after reading this..this was hot..

Anonymous said...

Good stuff!! i'm glad i accepted the invitation. :~)
dsp

Somebodies Friend said...

Hey Keith,

This one goes with your post over at 'Keiths place', it's all about dealing with the breakup and the loss associated with it.

Nice Poem keith, A little sad, but good nonetheless.

Blu Jewel said...

DAYUM!

Love!

Anonymous said...

how did you know...LOL