Thursday, February 26, 2009

Generous Woman


/You say that you've got your secrets...
and frankly I'm scared...
You say that you're delicately held together
and that I should beware..
and that if I want us to have it goin on...
goin on...
then I'll have to be generous.../

/You say that my timing is off..
and well, certainly,I'm concerned..
you don't know how "real" you can be..
and yet you sound like you're talkin the same
old jive to me..
oh damn,I should've learned..
but we could have had something real goin on
goin on
but then I'd of had to have been generous...
generous to you, baby...../

/Are you a generous woman?
can you give
when I've got nothing left?
do you understand..
that if I have to be such a generous man..
then I need..
a generous woman to walk beside me and hold my hand../

/You tell me you need time to think..
and baby ,I'm worried..
I think that maybe I need a drink..
You laugh and tell me don't hurry.
You want me to tell you what's on your mind..
but honey ,who is zoomin who?
peace and love is here to find..
it's all up to you..
because baby girl we could have something real goin on
somethin real strong
but you say I'll have to be generous to you.../

/but then again-
Are you a generous woman?
can you give
when I've got nothing left?
Do you understand
that if I have to be such a generous man
then I at least need..
an equally generous woman to be by my side
and to hold my hand../

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

firrrrrrrrrrrst!

Anonymous said...

Sorry got excited...ok now to comment...hahaha

I think that I am a very generous woman. I give my all to any that needs it. It then makes my day to know that I made or assisted someone for that day...

how are you Keith?

Anonymous said...

A Confusing, yet interesting little
poem Keith.

Anonymous said...

I think I've been too generous in my time.

Anonymous said...

Ahhhh, back to the poetry..I remember when this blog began..that was all you wrote was poems..then you got started with the fiction. You've really progressed.

Anonymous said...

I liked this poem, but I wasn't sure just what you were talking about..was it sex?

Anonymous said...

Interesting...I didn't know what to make of this poem.

Anonymous said...

I am a generous woman..too generous at times.

Anonymous said...

I could use a real generous woman
right about now.lololol.

Anonymous said...

All my women are generous!lolololol.

Anonymous said...

I could stand to meet a generous woman.-lololol.

Anonymous said...

I thought this poem was about sex at first, but it goes a little deeper than that,doesn't it?

Anonymous said...

Of course it was about sex...That was my take on it.

Anonymous said...

The thing about poetry is ,it is open for interpretation..Only the author really knows what it's about.

Anonymous said...

I think You were talking about the totality of the entire relationship
right? That's my take.

Anonymous said...

Nice poem Keith!