Friday, January 16, 2009

And If


Baby you've got skin that's softer than a Rose petal
and a smile that's warmer than the sun that made it grow.
and after the first time we made love
I just had to let you know
that you were more than I ever expected..
and I think it's high time that you and I got connected./

/And if it feels like Heaven to you..
the way it feels to me..
then we are destined to be together,
you see...
just you
and just me...
And if this feels like Heaven..
my mind is telling me so..
Then it feels like forever
and by now I hope you know./

/Girl , remember when I used to watch you walk down the street
back in the days before I got to know you?
There was never a question in my mind
I wasn't going to waste another minute of my time...
I was sold on you..
because , I knew then positively-
that there was a special feeling that you were giving me../

/And if this feels like Heaven
the way it feels , when you're with me..
then we're destined to be together you see,
just you, just me..
And if it feels like Heaven
I hope your heart is telling you so...
Then it also feels like Forever
and by now you ought to know.../

17 comments:

Anonymous said...

You have been so romantic this week Keith..I must say I've been enjoying the poetry.

Anonymous said...

Ditto what my room-mate said!

Anonymous said...

Keep Up the good work Keith.

Anonymous said...

Heyy Keith, Another nice poem.

Anonymous said...

This was so pretty, Can't think of any other words to describe it.

Anonymous said...

Me likes, Me Likes.

Anonymous said...

It didn't have any sex, but it was a nice poem just the same.

Anonymous said...

I just loved it!

Anonymous said...

You on some Smokey Robinson ish with this Keith..but I like it.

Anonymous said...

I keep using that one word to describe you brother, and here it is again..Smooth!lol

Anonymous said...

Nice Poem. Time for another story though!

Anonymous said...

I could go for another week of poetry myself..This has been good.

Anonymous said...

Very Nice ...Super blogger.-lololol.

Anonymous said...

Hey Man, nice work...but I'm with Tate2...I'm fiending for a story.

SLC said...

Glad I get the emails. Wonderful distraction. Poem or story, it's all good.

Speaking of story. I like Sepia (or Sephia) but I've got a protective gene for Kevin. Seems like when he went out of town on business he kept it strictly business, while she was to quickly tempted. Feel like I'm wrapped up in a soap opera.

Have a blessed weekend.
SLC

Keith said...

@SLC-Hello Friend, how have you been? Funny you mention Kevin and Sepia..They'll be returning next week in a new story I've been working on...The first installment is called "Straight Deck"

Lyrically speaking said...

WOW...lovely piece, spills passion all over it, happy Friday and have a good weekend