Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Lady girl


When someone gives you
thier heart,
you don't have the right
to turn your nose up to them/

When a man with his heart
in his hands ,
shows you love
That love that you feel isn't good
enough for you,
could actually be a gem../

But oh, lady girl
you've got so much to learn...
about the ways of the world...
oh, lady girl
you who have no love ,have no right to
throw it away, toss it away, throw it away../

Who told you
that you were rich?
and what gives you the right
to act like a perfect bitch/

Yet you say
you say
that your heart is always begging for love
at least that's what you always say...
so why when love is offered to you
do you throw it away?/

Oh Lady girl
you've got so much to learn about the
ways of the world..
Poor Lady girl
you who have no love, have no right to
throw it away...toss it away..just waste it away../

20 comments:

Blu Jewel said...

you got your stuff off with this poem. Sometimes a women needs to know she really isn't all that like she thinks she is. Love it!

love to live; live to love!

Anonymous said...

I love this!

Anonymous said...

This sounds like it was written for a past lover.

Anonymous said...

I like this!

Anonymous said...

Very lyrical!

Anonymous said...

Did I detect bitterness or remorse in this poem?

Anonymous said...

An interesting look into your psyche!

Anonymous said...

Nice poem. Being Gay, I can't relate..but I've been with men who acted undeserving.

Anonymous said...

Nice poem and great artwork too!

Anonymous said...

did you know that next month is National Poetry month?

Keith said...

@ Simon- Actually ,I did know that and I'm planning to post a lot of poetry soon.

Keith said...

@Toni,Angie B., Sunflower, Lisa, Halo,Ness and Blu Jewel- I wrote this poem when I was in college. It is about a former lover.

Anonymous said...

I feel you bruh, been there.

Anonymous said...

We all have a "lady girl" in our past somewhere.

Anonymous said...

Looking forward to some poetry...Did I read that you are working on yet another new charactor?

Anonymous said...

I have a "lady girl " that I'm dealing with right now...I'm going to show her this poem. (She looks just like the girl in your picture
bruh..you are in my head-lolol)

Anonymous said...

I won't toss my panties anymore...(Well I won't tell you tell you about it! (smile) but I am looking forward to some sensual poetry and some sensual charactors in the future.

Keith said...

@Tate2- I am working on a new charactor and some new stories for the spring.

Anonymous said...

Still going strong over here huh Keith?

Keith said...

I make it do what it do Sean-lololol.