Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Promise


/I'll take your hand within my hand
I know that sometimes promises sink like quicksand..
but just know this..
I'll love you the very best I can..
I can't perform miracles...
I'm only a mortal man./

/Neither love nor fate is left up to me
and in the coming days whatever will be
will just be..
I won't promise you the sun...
and I won't expect the moon from you..
and I won't promise you the sky...
but I'll tell you what I will do..
I'll promise you that I'll try...
to do all of the things a man is supposed to...
to keep you happy../

/Right now I've never been more sure of what I feel
and what I feel , I'm certain is real...
but feelings change from one day to the next
and it all can get complicated at best.../

/Neither love nor fate is left up to me or you
and what you say you feel for me may change
, this I know to be true..
so don't try to make me believe that the day
will never come when you might want to leave..
Just know that it's not a crime..
to say ,we'll take it one day at a time..
and come what may...
because you know I'll ask you why...
one fine day...
so let's be realistic and just say....
Promise me you'll try...
Promise me you'll try...
because you know that I would../

/I promise you
that I'll try...
to do all of the things a man should do
to keep you happy
and never cause you to cry...

I promise you.../

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

This was beautiful keith.

Anonymous said...

I don't believe it...I'm first today!

Anonymous said...

This was beautiful and touching..now if only I had a man to touch me and make me feel beautiful.

Anonymous said...

@anoymous- I hear you...That's what every single woman wants.

Anonymous said...

Very nice Keith..Such a change of pace.

Anonymous said...

Simply Beautiful Keith!!!

SLC said...

Nice. You've got an awesome gift.
This one showed your dexterity (again).
Anonymous; I hope you get a man that can touch you in more ways than one, and make you feel even more beautiful than you already know you are.

SLC

Somebodies Friend said...

What a piece Keith, I couldn't have said it better myself.

This poem projects feelings of true love, but also love that isn't blind, because all to often love is blind, and feeling get crushed if it doesn't work out.

I know I will read this one to the gal next time I see her, because it certainly rings true!

Thanks Keith

Shanita Waters said...

Nice touch. I like the poetry with the pictures even though your words are illustrative alone.

Anonymous said...

This is such a beautiful poem... It's my first time here but I will be back. It is so beautifully written and honest