Sunday, October 19, 2008

Can't Say No More


I'm supposed to be the one that makes you come ..
like the falling rain, everytime you say my name
but you do that for me..
though it took a little while , now I see..
because I'm satisfied through and through
,nights spent making sweet love to you./

/girl, when you do me like you do..it's better
than any woman I've had before and I ..can't say
no more...
I can't say no more../

/That mystery fragrance that you wear
the style and color of your hair..
the tenderness of your touch, that thrills
me so much..
the sound of your voice..
never left me much choice...
except to surrender to you totally...
you've got me thinking about sex with you
constantly../

/and I've never felt like this about anyone
in my life..
I've heard people talk about this on Oprah
or Dr. Phil once or twice..
I feel like warm water is gushing through my veins
and once in bed with you..
I am truly feeling no pain../

/When we do it nice and slow..
when we get into a rhythm and a flow..
I can't compare you to anyone else that I know
or have known before..
I just can't say no more..
I can't say no more../

/Baby,when you do me like you do..
it's like every sensation is brand new.
and I could bore you with stories of how
I used to spend my lonely nights..
but right now, everything seems just right..
I can't say no more..
I can't say no more./

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow such powerful pic

Anonymous said...

oh and im firsttttttttttttt

Anonymous said...

I'm hotter than a firecracker in a gas station,right about now...

Keith said...

@Kin'shar- Yes you are...Welcome!

Anonymous said...

This was hot and sexy Keith and that artwork...wow!

Anonymous said...

I love the artwork you spotlight with your poems and stories Keith.
Loved this poem too.

Anonymous said...

Nice poem...Are you writing anymore stories soon? I love your stories.

Anonymous said...

Brother....I read that poem and looked at that picture and ..I can't say no more..lolololol..very
hot!

Keith said...

@Sunflower- Yes..I am working on another mystery as we speak. It's called "The Singing Blogger" Catch it sometime this week.

♥ CG ♥ said...

Hey cousin :)! This is hot! Now, if I can only find a dude to read it aloud to me...hee hee. Enjoy your Sunday!

T. Michelle Theus said...

Not sure if my previous comment went through...but I said something like:


1st time visitor to your blog :)


Great poem, I could see the imagery and feel the intensity of the emotions.


And WAK is my favorite artist!

Anonymous said...

Hey had to come back and take a look at these pics man.....lol.

























oh and I am following you!!

Still Patrice said...

Nice pic

nicer poem :)