I'm gonna be thinking about you
when I know you're feeling bad
It's gonna put a smile on my face
knowing that you too are sad..
alone on Friday night
in your room in your sexiest underwear...
waiting for someone to call...
hoping that someone cares.
I'm gonna be thinkin about you
when I know you're alone and blue..
knowing that I did what you...
what you told me to do...
You told me to find someone
who could treat me better than you...
find me a girl, who would treat me
the way I deserve to be ...
treated..
You didn't think I could do that,
Did you?
I'm gonna think about you
when I know that you're all alone...
not getting any text messages
nor any calls on your cell phone..
sitting alone in your room on a
Saturday night in your sexiest underwear...
trying to find one of your old standbyes to
call...
and no one is at home or bothers to care...
I'm gonna be thinking of you.
10 comments:
I am first today...Yes that was a very mean poem...but a good one just the same.
Reading my favorite blogs and drinking coffee again...Nice job
Keith..Was this written to an ex-girlfriend?
Awww,I thought I was first..Cool
Artwork as usual..even cooler poetry..reminds me of something Prince would write.lol
Brother, the visuals I was getting from this peice made me want to take a cold shower.lolol...You've been on a roll this week.
I actually did write this about an ex- several years after the fact
though. I was listening to something by Joni Mitchell that actually inspired the thought.
Tomorrow a new mystery begins!
I hope there is some sex scenes in it.
Hey Keith, Love both of your blogs,
especially this one...Nice poem..
@anonymous-you need a man-lololol
I wish I knew who you were.
Lol that was mean but prolly well deserved
I think your new post goes up in about 15 minutes, but I gotta comment on this one. The poem was great, but the creature in that picture would have know problem ......you know. My favorite line......knowing that I did what you...what you told me to do.
See ya at midnight bro.
SLC
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