Friday, October 17, 2008

While I'm Trying To Sleep


I want to hold you
want to kiss you
want to undress you
want to hear you moan too..
what I won't do..
is sit by the phone
wishing you were here
while my neighbors bed rams into
the wall of my room..
and I sit here surrounded by four walls
of gloom/

/Don't waste any more time on the phone
grab a taxi..I'll pay the fare..
just get here soon, I don't care..
I'm jealous of the hours my neighbor
and his girlfriend keep..
while I'm trying to sleep
while I'm trying to get some sleep../

/you see he's
holding her tight
doing her right
his kissing her
caressing her
all through this night..
and she's starting to moan..
you could be sounding like that too..
if you weren't still on the phone
that could be my bed ramming up against the wall
of his room../

/put down the cell phone
grab a taxi...
I'll pay the fare
just get here soon..
I don't care..
I'm jealous of the hours my next door neighbors keep
when I'm trying to sleep
when I'm trying to get some sleep./

10 comments:

Somebodies Friend said...

Hey Keith

If I didn't know better, that sounds like an invitation for somebody to come over for a little action.

It's been quite a while since I've had any action, almost five months.

I couldn't get so lucky ;).

I'm heading home for the night, take it easy Keith, talk to you tomorrow.

Keith said...

I wrote this poem years ago for my wife, before she was my wife..lololol

Anonymous said...

Now that's what I'm talkin bout..
That was at least close to it.
I checked out those two blogs you recomended yesterday...Good Stuff.

Anonymous said...

Loved the sentiment in this poem
good brother. Just loved it.-LMAO
at you..You sound like my kinda guy-lololol. I'm calling up my girl right now.lolololol.

Anonymous said...

You are soooo fresh Keith-lolololol.

Anonymous said...

Great Poem Keith...I'm still laughing.

Anonymous said...

I am laughing out loud at this one..very cleverly written Keith.

Keith said...

Why is everybody laughing? what is so funny?-lolol.

Eb the Celeb said...

Reminds me of that JOE song "How soon"

loves it!

Still Patrice said...

awww.. how sweet for wifey :)