Monday, May 11, 2009

To Be Invisible

To Be Invisible
whenever you're around
then you would never witnessing
the new love that you've found./

No one would have to witness my
public shame..
I wouldn't have to hear people
laying blame../

I was a fool to let you go
seeing you now
it's apparent that I know../

I don't want to go near it
I don't want to hear it..
I don't want to go there
it's just not fair../

To be invisible
so you'd never see me cry..
when you walk by
with that other guy../

To be alone
with my wounded pride
truly alone
without you by my side./

I was a fool to let you go
and every coming day
my conscience says 'I told you so'/

I don't want to hear it
I don't want to be near it
I don't want to go there
it's just not fair...
to be invisible..
to be invisible...
to be-


James Perkins said...

Can't tell you how many times I've felt like this!

Simon Bastion said...

As always ,your poetry is very visual...I can picture this.

Grover Tha Playboy said...

Nice, but that's to be expected.

Lisa said...

Heyy Keith..Nice work as usual.

Vanessa said...

As a woman, I have wanted to be invisible myself...This is a universal situation here.

Halo said...


Swaggie said...

As usual, the business man.

Tate2 said...

This takes me to a recent place man, for real.

Jazzy said...

Love your poetry!

Toni said...

I like this...Give us more poetry.

Angie B. said...

I love the poem.

I like this guy's art too, it's so colorful.

Sunflower said...

You don't know how much I can relate to this poem...from a woman's perspective.Thank You.

Sean said...

No Matter keep it coming..You are so prolific man.

Captain Jack said...

I can sooo relate to this.

Cheryl said...

Nice !

Brenda said...

Poetry, Fiction, Short Stories
and great commentary...What is it you don't write?lolol..Love your blogs.

Anonymous said...

Nice Poem.....

What's Next as far as stories go?

Blu Jewel said...

so touching and so real.

love to live; live to love!