/I'm not looking for the Red Sea to part..
  I'm just looking for some truth from your heart..
  I don't expect to hear people speaking in several different tongues..
  but I would like to know that I am the one../
/ You never reveal the truth from your heart..
    there are suspicions that I've had from the start..
    that while I'm thinking that I might just be the one...
    you're really just having a little fun../
/  please don't interupt ...
    if I'm wrong..
    please just help me clear this up...
    then I'm gone...
    I'm just looking for some kind of sign...
    a sign from you that I'm not wasting my time../
 /I don't need to be rescued from the lions den
   but I need an emotional rescue..
   tell me that I'm more than just your "brother"
   or your friend..
   I don't need to feel the heat of the burning bush
   but I do have a burning question that needs an answer
   ,so perhaps you need a little push../
  /but you hide from me how you really feel...
    I never really am sure, just what is the deal..
    Am I really the one?
    or are you just having fun?/
   /Please don't interupt me
     I could be wrong...
     just clear this matter up
     and I'll be gone..
     Sometimes a brother just needs a sign...
     a sign from you that I'm not just wasting
     my time./
 
 

5 comments:
Nicely worded. The emotional sentiment comes through clearly. I know some people who need to read this and use it in their current relationships.
Keith, I love this.
Keith, I sure could have used this a month ago. All I'd need to do is replace the references to "brother" to "sister" and it would convey exactly what I went through. Needless to say, I felt ya on this one.
ohh wow i cant tell you how many times i have felt like this poem
this was deep and brought back some memories,lol
i definitely liked this one Keith
This is usually how most women feel...thanks for sharing a brothers true perspective. They don't make them like you anymore Keith.
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